God is what we praise in. God is now in heaven he is looking down to us. God is able to help me because he gave us his words to my brain and and i write it. i believe in God because he is my Saviour. God protects us and he made all of us. He give us food and he creates all of this world. i believe God is my Everything. He is my king and all of us. God loves all of us.
Thursday, September 13, 2007
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Beni, Please use correct punctuation. You need to copy your draft from class time.
Hi Beni, I have copied and pasted your work here with my corrections. You got 6/10
God is whom we praise. God is now in heaven he is looking down at us. God is able to help me because he gives us his words in my brain so that I can write it. I believe in God because he is my Saviour. God protects us and he made all of us. He gives us food and he creates all of this world. I believe God is my everything. He is my king and the King of all living things. God loves all of us.
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